AzraelusGuy's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[APEX LEGENDS: Alter The 1V1 Experience! Portal War!]

Great and dynamic choreography! Nice to see movement dune so smooth but feel almost pencil-like art :)

[KEFLA thinks she's... demure]

Nice work! Smooth animation :3

[Sally and the Cup]

Great and funny! Nice to watch it... 7 times in row :P

[Big Kid's Toy | Gwen Geek]

Nice and smooth... its good to see GOOD animation ... such rarity :3

[TRICK OR TRICK - Pumpky Animatic]

Some spooks ... some fun... and for many both :3

[Fergus Conley - Fight Scene]

Nice "test animation" looking dynamic and intense... good foundation on You own story :)

[Wilfried Loop]

Nice lineart and shading! He still has His glasses on head when loop putting it on from a hand - that is small nitpick if I may advise :3

YSNartworks responds:

Yeah true, a valid criticism, I tried to rush a bit this frame 'cause I wanted to finish in one night, (even if I didn't managed to do it). I also got the folds wrong on the shirt, didn't apply good squash and stretch (cause I forgot about this anim rule, because of how long I didn't animated), didn't build nice anticipations, and abandonned the idea to animate the light source and color the background. Tbh the only thing that does hold this anim together is really the line art and shading as you said.

I can understand your note, I'll try to do better next time, hoping you'll get the opportunity to see it !

[The dark puzzle of Life ep1]

Intriguing work of art! I wasn't bored at all and rather feel engaged in Story :) Nice one ... keep it up!

[Roads of Space]

Pretty nice job! A lot of effort was put into it - that is commendable! There is a lot of things to improve but it was a nice ride so keep it up :3

[Savlonic : Happy Friend]

Really nice!